स्कोर क्या हुआ है... / what's the score...

shared by straight point on Wednesday, December 17, 2008

प्रिय मित्र सौल्बेर्री के अनुरोध पर... एक आम क्रिकेट प्रेमी कि कहानी...

स्कोर क्या हुआ है...


मंहगाई के प्रहार में... मंदी की मार में
काम की उम्मीद में... रोटी की तलाश में

स्कोर क्या हुआ है...

बॉस की डांट में... राशन की कतार में
टिकटों की लाइन में... बारी के इंतज़ार में

स्कोर क्या हुआ है...

मायूस चेहरों पे... खुशी की तलाश में
कुछ कर दिखाने की... कोशिश के करार में

स्कोर क्या हुआ है...

जिंदगी की धूप में... आशाओं की छांव में
मेहनत की ज़मीन से... उम्मीद की उड़ान में

स्कोर क्या हुआ है...

आतंक के खौफ में... संगीनों के साए में
खेल के इंतजार में... जीत के उन्माद में

स्कोर क्या हुआ है...


Update
there's another "what's score" by naked cricket...enjoy!


(for hinglish version of this poem)



the story of a common cricket fan... on the behest of dear friend soulberry...

what's the score...


mehngai ke prahar mein...mandi ki maar mein
kaam ki ummeed mein...roti ki talash mein

score kya hua hai...

booss ki daant mein...rashan ki katar mein
tickton ki laaeen mein...baari ke intazaar mein

score kya hua hai...

maayoos chehron pe...khushi ki talash mein
kuchh kar dikhane ki...koshish ke karar mein

score kya hua hai...

zindagi ki dhoop mein...ashaaon ki chhanv mein
mehnat ki zameen se...ummeed ki udaan mein

score kya hua hai...

aatank ke khauf mein...sangeeno ke saaye mein
khel ke intzaar mein...jeet ke unmaad mein

score kya hua hai...

19 comments:

Anil Singh said...

The word for the poem is "Brilliant".

Flawlessly, gave words to the role cricket plays in every Cricket lover's life.

I'm still awestruck, by your talent.

I'll give Highest priced real estate on CricketUA to your creativity. More people should read the gem.

Check out cricketUA in after 15 minutes.

Kinka said...

सोल्बेरी के अनुरोध पर, विभिन्न विषयों को जोड़कर
कविता एक लिख, हमारे सामने परोसकर..
ये तो बतादे ए दोस्त.... स्कोर क्या हुआ है…
बहुत खूब...

straight point said...

i am truly overwhelmed by your uninhibited appreciation AB...

thank you very much...

straight point said...

बहुत बहुत धन्यवाद् किंका...जैसे ही पता चलेगा अप्पको सबसे पहले बताऊँगा... :)

Gaurav Sethi said...

Wah wah SP sahab!

Soulberry said...

अरे बताओ भी ना स्कोर क्या हुआ - अपना सचिन खेल रहा हैं ना भाय्या!

वाह साहब वाह!

Anonymous said...

Fundoo aur bahut khooob........

in shabdo ke jariye Pankajji, aapne na sirf hum bhartiyo ke rashtriya dharm ke bare me likha he bulki yeh bhi bataya he ki chahe hum kuch bhi kar rahe ho, humare dimag ka ek hissa satat match ko follow kar raha hota hain

Anonymous said...

humare yaha sab logo ke expert comments hote he aur ek chai tapri pe baithne wala bhi dravid ko sujhav dene me sankoch nahi karega ki use apna offstump cover karna chahiye ya sachin ko across the line nahi khelna chahie!!

straight point said...

Gshaab G...thanks!!

straight point said...

धन्यवाद् सोल्बेर्री जी
जिस तरह से हमारी टीम खेल रही है लगता है कोई भी स्कोर काफी नहीं होगा... :)

straight point said...

thanks sam...

yup...cricket makes everyone of us 'arm chair' pundits...and why not? after all we have made it from game to 'religion' for nothing... :)

Anonymous said...

वाह साहब वाह!... एक क्रिकेट प्रशंसक के लिए क्या एक खूबसूरत पोस्ट!

My hindi is terrible but enjoy.

straight point said...

i am pleasantly surprised scopry... :)

thank you very much!!

Trideep said...

वाह पन्कज वाह!!! क्या खूब लिखा है... तुस्सि great हो जी!

Anonymous said...

very well written SP. It truly captures the state of the common cricket fan :)

kahin bhi ho, kaisi bhi acchi ya buri situation me ho...bas kahin se bhi score pata chal jaaye....

straight point said...

thank you tri :)

straight point said...

yes megha...at the back of mind this q always lingers hence the poem...

thanks & cheers!!

N/A said...

Your poem, just ask me to remember our team panelist Mr. Manoria. Hmm.

Really a brilliant Poem. More Marks because you are not regular poem writer.

straight point said...

thanks IB... :)

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